“Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live”
I like this a lot. Your repetition was great but the color of the font was kindof hard to read over the picture. Other than that great job :) and I really like your blog btw.
This is really awesome Sammy! I love the picture in the backround, and the poem is so well written. You used repetition very well in this piece.
I Love the picture! it seems to fit really good with your piece. I like how in your poems, you repeat, it adds a bigger effect.
I like this a lot. Your repetition was great but the color of the font was kindof hard to read over the picture. Other than that great job :) and I really like your blog btw.
ReplyDeleteThis is really awesome Sammy! I love the picture in the backround, and the poem is so well written. You used repetition very well in this piece.
ReplyDeleteI Love the picture! it seems to fit really good with your piece. I like how in your poems, you repeat, it adds a bigger effect.
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