Thursday, March 4, 2010

Stone: Stream of Consciousness

Author's Note: This was a stream of consciousness I had. It doesn't have a point to it.

I look down 1,000 ft below me, into the livid river. My harness straps tightly around me, binding me to the chord attached to the ledge. With a scream that could be heard from the heavens, I plummet down, down, down, my face inches away from the stoney mountainside. Seconds before the water tears me apart, the chord springs me back up. I heave a sigh of relief, knowing I'm able to live for at least one more day.

2 comments:

  1. That was a little random but it was pretty good. The only suggestion I have is to make it longer.

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  2. I would never have thought of that when I think of stone. That's so cool! I could picture the whole scene. The only thing was "...knowing I'm able to live for at least one more day?" maybe exaggerate on that a little bit.

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