Thursday, May 27, 2010

The Unavoidable Feeling

Author's Note: During Language arts, I couldn't decide what to write about. Then I realized how hungry I was, because this class is right before lunch. This poem describes this feeling.


Working hard,

On the computer,

I notice something,

That should be helped sooner,

A lion-like growl,

Erupts from my tummy.

It's then I realize,

I need something yummy.

Seconds ticking by,

Seems more like hours.

I can't take it much longer,

I don't have those powers.

Then the bell breaks the quiet,

Just like a car horn's blast.

Sitting in the lunchroom,

I'm cured at last.

3 comments:

  1. Haha I really liked that poem. It really made me laugh, and I liked the rhyming. I can definitely relate!

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  2. Yeah I know exactly how you feel Sammy haha. This poem was really cool, and like Natalie said, I really liked the rhyming too. It made it more fun to read. Nice job :)

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  3. So true. The rhyming was awesome.

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